Neku: *He nodded as he saw Kouki off*

in the morning kyoushi goes to neku and said sisy not aloud to leave home anymore

Neku: Not allowed? How come? Let me guess, your mother.

kyoushi: she even make her wear rags now

Neku: ... Why is she so cruel?

kyoushi: cause sisy is pettier then mommy

Neku: ... Damn,

kyoushi: the mirror said so

Neku: I see, and now your mother basically despises Kouki.

kyoushi: i feel bad for sisy

Neku: I do too,

kyoushi: im going home i hope to see you again

Neku: I hope to see you again as well.

kyoushi leaves (mind being the mother)

(I don't know, I'm not good at being characters others created. Sorry)

(she can act anyway you want she a just there chacter or you can make up a mother for kyoushi and kouki)

(So I can make up a new mother for them?)

(yep but it have to steal the young and hates her daughter cause she pretty)

(Got it her name is Kera)
Kera: So tell me something Kouki, why is it that you're prettier than me?! I'm the one who should be prettier not you!!!

kouki: i dont know......

Kera: You don't know huh? You should!!! Because look at you, you're young!!!! In the meanwhile, I'm old!!!! And I steal people's youth.
(Can Neku come in at some point?)

kouki: im sorry mama
(sure and can kouki mom blind her daughter)

Kera: You're sorry?! Well guess what, your apology is nothing to me, because you're nothing to me.
Neku: I've had enough, I can't wait any longer, *grabbed his sword in sheathe and put it to his side, as he headed through the doorway*
Kera: She grabbed her blade* I think, the only way I can be happy, is if your life is ended. *she readied her sword*

kouki crying and said i love you mama

Kera: This is the end *she swung the sword*
Neku: *came and blocked the sword in time*

kouki feel being grab by her mother and feel a dagger close to her face and kouki said i love you mama

Kera: What the...
Neku: Looks like I made it, So you must be the woman!!!
Kera: You insolent half demon.
Neku: Not just a half demon, a prince half demon.

kouki scearms with her mother blined to leave a huge scar on her face (kouki is half demon too)

Neku: Kouki, you alright?

kouki holding her face and yells mama i cant see!!

Neku: She's blinded, *looked to Kera* What the hell did you do to her?!
Kera: I blinded her eyesight, now she can never see,
Neku: Why you!!!

kouki crys as the blood rush out her face

Neku: Damn, *pushed Kera off and got Kouki back to his place* MOTHER!!!
Queen: Her eyes, hold on, *focusing her energy* Your eyes will be healed in no time, *She used a healing skill which healed Kouki's eyes and restored her sight*
Neku: You stay here Kouki, I'll take care of her.

kouki: i cant see nothing only darkness were my brother (i want kouki blind and never to see)

(Oh ok got it)
Neku: Don't worry, he'll be safe, in a matter of seconds,
*saw Kiyoushi on a demon wolf*
Neku: Nicely done Valon,
Valon: Glad I could help out, I was able to get him out fast enough, it's all up to you now.

kouki: im in so much pain

Neku: I'm going to end this, *He exited and headed through the doorway*
Queen: *using healing* I'm gonna ease that pain, don't worry.
Kera: You little crafty demon...
Neku: You're the problem here, all because you grow old, you steal youth to look beautiful,
Kera: Oh, are you gonna give me a lecture?
Neku: Nah, *drew his sword and summoned it's true form* I'm gonna kill you instead,

kouki: maybe if i wasnt a half demon mama would love me

Queen: Don't think like that Kouki,
Valon: I used to think the same thing, what if I was a human instead of a demon wolf. Would Neku accept me better? After spending enough time, he didn't care whether or not I was a wolf.

kouki: why shouldnt i?

Queen: Because thinking like that causes stress. Don't stress yourself out thinking about that, she doesn't like the fact that you're more beautiful than her,

kouki: im her daughter

Queen: If she was truly a mother, would she have blinded her own daughter?

kouki: i dont know.....

Queen: That's not something a mother should do,

kouki: i should of die.......................

Queen: No, you shouldn't. You should not die, because your life still holds its own purpose.

kouki: no it dont anymore im blind i cant work i cant even take care of my brother now im useless

Queen: We'll help you, we'll take care of you both

kouki: why would you do that?