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15 Tips For Writing Better Dialogue via FilmCourage.com.
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In a weekly "test" single people who are looking for a partner ask their mother and their best friend to help.Their mother chooses one partner and their best friend chooses another.The test is to see who can choose the best partner!
This week's single man is Richard Taylor,a 26-year-old musician from Southampton.His mother Meg chooses one girl,and his best friend Danny chooses another.Then Richard goes on a date with each girl.Which girl does he prefer?Who knows him better,his mother or his best friend?Who chooses the right girl for him?


"I usually work in England but sometimes I work abroad...
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posted by wildcannabis
Body and Appearance
1. Describe the character's height and build. Is he heavyset, thin, short, rangy?

2. How old is he?

3. Describe his posture. Does he carry himself well or does he slouch?

4. How is his health? Is he fit or out of shape? Any illnesses or conditions? Any physical disabilities?

5. How does he move? Is he clumsy, graceful, tense, fluid?

6. How attractive is this character physically? How does he perceive himself in the mirror?

7. Describe his complexion. Dark, light, clear, scarred?

8. Describe his hair: color, texture, style.

9. What color are his eyes?

10. Does the character...
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posted by ZekiYuro
My Name's Jon,And This Happened To Me When I Was On Holiday In Seville,In The South of Spain.


I was having a coffee in a bar when a man came up to me.He was quite smartly dressed,and he looked very respectable.'Do you speak English?'he asked.He definitely wasn't Spanish,but I'm not sure where he was from.'I'm very sorry to bother you,but I have a serious problem,'he continued.'I'm here on a business trip,and I've lost my briefcase-it had my passport,my wallet,my money,my credit cards,my mobile,my address book,everthing.Could you help me?I need to borrow 60 euros to get the train to Madrid-my...
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posted by ZekiYuro
Writing and design have always been two passions of mine. When someone first approached me with a writing opportunity for their blog, I was shocked. It hadn’t crossed my mind for a moment that the two could be brought together harmoniously. I still remember writing that article and building my first brainstorm of topics. I found myself asking, "What makes a good article?"




But, to hell with good articles. Anyone can write a good article. I wanted something that would floor everyone–that would make everyone say, "Who the heck is this guy, and why haven’t I read his stuff before?"

I’m always...
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Hmm...James, bringing back any memories-Lulu
Hmm...James, bringing back any memories-Lulu
____after school_____getting ready in Lulu's bathroom
I was listening to "Bella's Lullaby"from my faveorite Robert Pattinson flicks.It was blasting through the speakers.Andria was applying baby blue eyeshadow.I was putting on mascara.I popped my lips when the song was over.The next song that came up was Ke$ha's "Blah Blah Blah".I looked over towards Andria.We loved this song.We started singing.Halfway through the song I heard my phone singing "Fearless"by Taylor Swift.That meant it was Rob.I picked it up and put it on speaker."Hey Rob!"I said."Hey,Lu."he said."Andria's here too."He chuckled."Cool.Hey...
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posted by tayandkris4evr
Third part. Comment, fan, but above all... enjoy. :)

Recap

“Where am I going to take care of you then, Tye?” I ask, already worried for my new little brother. That’s how I thought of him anyway, a little brother! I’ve always wanted one.

“Not sure… Let’s pretend we’re orphans and walk around see if anyone has the heart to take us in.” He snickers. He really is my brother! I laugh then knuckle bump with him.

“Hey, I get a new name now, right? I’ve always liked the name Dean, can I be Dean?” I asked excitedly. I need to start acting like a guy, puh…

“Ha ha! That sounds...
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Jonas and Gabriel laughed as the ride ended. He could still hear something that he had never heard before. Perhaps it is what Giver called misuc, he though. Gabriel, who was smiling and chuckling with delight, was now quiet tilted his head in one direction as if he heard something. Then he yelled out, "Bird!"
Jonas, thinking that he meant that there was a plane near by, quickly picked up Gabriel and seeing that there was no where to hide, layed flat on the snow holding Gabriel tightly. He heard a cry, and looked up to see a white bird flying to the south. Instantly he remembered a time when...
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The next day at school they had an athlete tryout at lunch time in the stadium. “Alec, there you are I’ve been looking all over for you, why are you watching the tryouts, man” Said Marley. “Nothing, just supporting people” Said Alec with a big smile on his face. “Your perving on the girls aren’t you?” Said Marley. “You know me too well man; take a sit, perv with you fellow friends” Said Alec with the same smile. ‘I’ll join you guys” Said Nathan while watching a girl sprint. “You guys are such pervs, man” Said Marley even though he was sitting right next to them...
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posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

When the movie was over, I had no idea what I'd just seen.

**************************************************

We sat down in a restuarant.

It was so easy to talk to him. Not in the "Tia" way, but just that I felt I could say anything and not be judged.

I told him about the Michigan boyfriend, and he didn't stop laughing for a full minute.

"So I should probably not mess with your mom," he said.

"Probably not," I agreed, as I tried to stop laughing by forcing myself to take a sip of coke.

I ducked my head in an attempt to prevent another laughing fit, and the irritating piece of hair that...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
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Another day at another life, I thought to myself as I walked home. I won’t go all emo about it and tell you my life sucks, because to you it would most likely be heaven. My family is rich, I am in the popular group every girl in my school is obsessed with my brother. Everything about me is picture perfect, my looks. I have wavy blonde hair to die for; my eyes were very light green almost yellow. I was slender I had always been. And to top it all I have a jock boyfriend, I know how cliché. I let out a deep sigh once I looked at the clock, it was nearly...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
Today was Saturday. It had been 3 days since Ethan’s and Thor’s night of fun and ever since then everyone has been laying off the whole fall in love thing so today I decided to give the pendant thing ago.

But this time something was different
This time when I closed my eyes and the pendant went up in the air and I saw the man with the woman she looked sad.

Like she was hiding something

I tried to get into her thoughts tried to see what her feelings where but it stopped again. I got up and ran down stairs, Thor was the only one that was home and with him was Ethan. I was panting, Ethan got up,...
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posted by khfan12
Vialo By: Josie Mahre

Prolige
"Run, Ella, run!" said Vialo. "I'm running as fast as I can!" Ella said. Vialo is a 14-year-old girl with the unique name Vialo Tarah Wilson, also, she has superpowers and the ability to take over / rule the universe / save the universe. Her friend, Ella Newbie, also has superpowers. "Ella, we can hide here." said Vialo. "Vialo, go on without me. I'll catch up." said Ella. "No. I'll just telaport us out." said Vialo. "No! Vialo, they'll find you easier!" said Ella. All of a sudden, some people walked up to them. "You two aren't out yet?" asked one. "No Jasper....
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In the years following the war the Ministry of Magic struggled to regain the public's trust whilst people struggled to find peace of mind in the uncertainty of Voldemort's disappearance. In 1985 letters start appearing with a very concerning or very hopeful kind of message, depending on your point of view and personal beliefs. They are so anti-establishment, in parts so truthful, and thus potentially dangerous that the Ministry controlled Daily Prophet won't publish them or any talk about them on the Readers' Column.

The letters lay out a vision of future where the Ministry no longer exists...
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posted by Mermaidsea
Hair Ppllllllllllllllllllllllll! I am a mermaid fan and wanna be a mermaid! But I wanna see if I'm actually a mermaid... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................................ we can find out together :) comment if I know a sight that tells us if I they a mermaid :)
I heard that I can have these signs:
1. U love the ocean
2. The ocean is calling out for u
3. U don't like wearing pants
4. I r naive
5. I love baths
6. I watch day little mermaid everyday. But the question is are we mermaids? Do we have a psychic connection with the ocean?
Are we even humans?...
Pls we can help each other find out :)
Writing Anti-Heroes, Developing A TV Show, and Selling Two TV Pilots by Peter Russell via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by zanhar1
You hear a lonesome bird call as you wander out of the forest. It is dull and misty. The sky is concrete, you can taste rain in the air.

Fell it on the breeze.

But you don't care, you keep waking. Walking into the opening where the trees grow ever more sparse. Where the woodland meets the grassland and all that remains are the twigs and trunks the forest had coughed out. Your bate feet slide over the greenest dewy grass. And here you arrive with a sense of peace despite the chilly drizzle that has just begun to fall. A few more steps have you standing in the center of an earthy ring. You are...
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posted by FalliNgSparks
The girl I saw had a pure soul
Her eyes sparkled like a precious stone

Her heart was much golden than her hair
her charming hair flew in the air

.......But I knew she had an aimless life

Every part of her body was filled with an innocent tear
But I made her comfy and told her dear,

nobody is useless.

As she heard this,
every part of her body went fearless.

In a hand I saw a pearl...
& that hand was of the blonde girl.
On the bus, I had to sit next to Natalie. Natalie was a little too friendly... especially towards me. When nobody was looking she mind controlled me and made me kiss her. "Focus Natalie!" Chantal always said when Natalie started to flirt. Natalie scowled at Chantal then said, "You're no fun Chantal." Chantal responded by saying, "Damn right I am! Please stop flirting with him." Natalie smiled then said, "Why? Do you like him?" Chantal glared at Natalie then said, "Not in the way that you do." Natalie smiled for the second time and said, "Then why can't I have him?" Chantal responded. "Because...
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posted by MagicalMadness
I've always wanted to be a mermaid! I recently found this spell and I've already got some of the side effects! I know that not all spells work for everybody but I hope this one works for you;)
First the side effects: (are some of the side effects I got)
-dizziness
-headache
-itchy legs and back
-singing a lot
-crossing legs a lot

What you will need:
-cup/bowl
-water(warm or cold doesn't matter)
-salt
-tea spoon
-belief that the spell will work
-10 pm-11
-a symbol (necklace, bracelet)

What you need to do:
1.fill the cup/bowl halfway with water
2.put a tea spoon of salt into the water and stir
3.drop your...
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