chapter 1.

I woke up to someone yelling at me. Slowly, i opened my eyes, to see a asian girl running at me. se had a dagger in her hand, a shild in the other.
-who are you!- she damanded as she stuck her knife under my chin.
i searched my brain, i could seem to remeber anything, nothing.
-I, i dont know-
-how can you NOT know who you are?- she stuck her knife deeper into my skin.
thats when a pretty girl with freakles all over her body. her hair was blond, and her eyes were green.
-reyna! let him up!- she yelled at the girl who pinned me.
-go away hazle!-
I heard foots steps behind me, i turned my head to see a girl and a guy barge through the undergroth.
the girl had a mass of brown hair with streaks of blue in it. the boy next to her was short haired and bulky.
-bobby, dakota! help me.- the girl named hazle yelled.
-reyna, what are you doing!- the girl yelled.
-he attaked me, dakota!-
-he did?- the boy, who i guessed was bobby, asked.
-yes!-
-i did?- i said, confused. i didnt remeber attaking her, or anybody.
then she waved a pen in my face, -yes you did, with... what ever this is.-
she uncapped the pen and it grew in to a three foot sword.
the others studdied it, then dakota said, -like jason's sword.-
jasson, who was jason?
but the others wernt confused at all, they only nodded sadly.
-we should bring her yo the city....- bobby said
hazle and dakota nodded.
they turned to reyna, who ater a long pause, nodded to.
-lets go wimp.- she told me, then grabed my arm and forsed me to my feet, -lets get you to lupa and hope she kills you.-

nice way to start like percy doesnt know where he is then he attacks reyna then blacks out i guess nice.

WOW!!!

Nice start

chapter 2.

we walked up to a big house at the end of a row of small buildings. each one had a diffrent sign on them, one hand an eagle and a lightnig bolt, and one had an owl. i thought that i should know what it means, the owl... in the back of my head i could hear a womans vosie, saying somthing about stay away from..., just when i thought i had it, my mind seemed to have snapped. i let out a gasp, and the others looked at me.
-hey? are you... ok?- hazle asked me.
-yeah, why wouldn't i be, i mean, im only stuck in a place i shouldn't be and i cant rember a thing! yeah, im great!-
Hazle and daktoa shared glances.
-why shouldn't you be here?-
that stumpted me,-Like i said, i have to freakin' clue.-
they shared anouther glance.
-hey? didn't i stab you?- reyna stated.
-yeah.. why?-
she pointed to my neck, -look!-
hazle, dakota, and bobby stared open mouthed at my neck. i felt along my skin, but there was no mark, no blood.
-how? how in the name of hades?- bobby said
-Im getting really tired of this, but i dont know.-
-wierd..- dakota said.
reyna said somthing about me being really weird.
then a silver wolf appered out of no-were.
-lupa!- dakota said, then bowed.
the other followed her lead.
when i didn't bow, whitch i didn't know why, but it felt wrong, she turned her eyes on me.
-who is this? and why is he here?-
-We found him, attaked me, then blacked out, then woke up.-
-i didn't know that i attacked her..- i started
her gaze stopped me, then she said, -perseus jackson, i heard a lot about you.-
that floored me, also floored the others.
-but how can you know HIM!?!- reyna damanded.
-reyna, i am sorry, but can you take bobby, dakota, and hazle and leave , me and this young half-blood alone?-
-of corse lupa.-
the other turned and left.
lupa stared at me and said, -you should not have come.-

chapter 3.
(annabeth)

i sighed and twirled a peice of grass. i heard vosies rise as someone got into a fight. the whole camp has been working on the new ship.
piper came over and sat next to me.
piper has became my best friend since we both got back from where we had been, piper with her quest, me with trying to find percy. i rembered the horrible monsters i had to fight.
-Are you thinking about.... him?- piper said.
i smiled, she knew i didnt want to hear percy's name right now. piper smiled back.
then i sighed, -yeah, im thinking about him a lot.-
she nodded, -I wouldn't like it if jason was stolen.-
she frowned and added, -i wonder if jason ever had a girlfriend?-
that struck a cord, what about percy? everyone here knew not to flirt with him, but nobody knew in that roman camp. the more she thought about it, the mare worried she got.
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i skipped the camp fire. instead i went to percy's cabin. i trased my finger across his bed, and spotted his armer from capter the flag. i was hard to belive, but his room still smelled like him. sweet, but more like ocean sweet, and it had that sweaty tint like you would find on an athlete. it was a sent that could drive anyone mad.
tear blurred my vision, so i ran out of his cabin, slambing the door on my way out.
i ran into my own cabin and crumbbled onto my bed.
when every one came in, the went dead silent, so the only thing you could hear was my soft sobs.

That's soo awesome and sweet:)!!

chapter 4.

-Why should i have not come?- i asked
lupa stared dead into my eyes, i wanted to back away, but knew that if i did somthing could go wrong. so i stood my ground and stared back into her silver eyes.
then she laughed, well.. it kind of sounded like a laugh, and half sounded like a growl/purr.
-you got heart, young one, but it won't keep you alive for long.-
then she jumped at me, flashing her teeth and claws.
some how i knew what to do. i grabbed the sword out of my pants, and uncapped it right at the last second.
then tip of my blade cut through her neck.
the she-wolf tummbled to the ground. gold blood spilled out of the wound. as i watched the blood of the gods, how i knew that im not sure, disapered and the wound closed.
she rasied her eyes and smiled( can a wolf smile?)at me.
-he taught you well, young hero, very well, you can stay.

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