The Heroes of Olympus The Daughter of Poseidon

JasmineValdez posted on Apr 12, 2012 at 08:08PM
While Percy Jackson is missing, and the Argo II
is being built, a new demigod arrives at camp. She is Jasmine Valdez, daughter of Poseidon(yes, it's me...)

All characters and whatnot besides me belong to Rick Riordan.

The storyline belongs to me.

Please comment.

Thanks for reading! :)
last edited on Apr 13, 2012 at 11:24PM

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over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
Will anyone even read this? Just asking.
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
I'm going to write anyway....
over a year ago theocean5566 said…
big smile
I will
over a year ago BitemeIVampire said…
Hey include me go to forum: Create Your Demigod Person and you will find out the stuff you don't know bout me.
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
Chapter 1
I grit my teeth and stare down at my half-completed F.C.A.T answer sheet.
Stupid standardized test.
I can't even read it, my dyslexia is causing the words and fill-in bubbles to float off the page and blur together. If that's not bad enough, the kid behind me is picking off parts of his eraser and flicking them at my head. Now-
Ouch!
I pull the pencil out of my dark blond hair and get out of my seat, ready to get this guy.
"Jasmine..", warns the teacher..
But before I can respond, the sink at the back of our science room explodes.
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
I know it's really short. U know what page ur on?
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over a year ago horse22133454 said…
Cool love it post soon:)
over a year ago BitemeIVampire said…
i am on the 1st!
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
... wrong forum, sorry. Found u now
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over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
Thank u guys for reading! :)
over a year ago BitemeIVampire said…
ok! i'll mail u what ain't on there...you went to my forum right?
over a year ago BitemeIVampire said…
ok! i'll mail u what ain't on there...you went to my forum right?
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
I read ur character profile if that's what you mean
over a year ago BitemeIVampire said…
my forum is called Create Your Demigod Person and i need to know what you want to know about me so you can make a good story with my character! errr i am confused
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
yes, i read ur thing on there. Now ur confusing me...
over a year ago BitemeIVampire said…
.....
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
yes i read it...
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
working on next chapter (hopefully longer) now
over a year ago BitemeIVampire said…
is there stuff you what to know about me?
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
I'll mail you if there's anything, but nothing at the moment
I think I have a basic plot now :3
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
And I think I'll introduce Ur character at camp half blood
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
New and improved Chapter 1

I grit my teeth and stare down at my half-completed F.C.A.T answer sheet.
Stupid standardized test.
I can't even read it, my dyslexia is causing the words and fill-in bubbles to float off the page and blur together. If that's not bad enough, the kid behind me is picking off parts of his eraser and flicking them at my head. Now-
Ouch!
I pull the pencil out of my dark blond hair and get out of my seat, ready to get this guy.
"Jasmine..", warns the teacher..
But before I can respond, the sink at the back of our science room explodes.

All of the students whip their heads back to see what happened ,and POP! The fire sprinklers in the ceiling begin to rain down on the class. Kids shreik as if the water was acid and cover their heads with notebooks and their hoodies. Even the teacher ducks under her desk. Pathetic.

The boy from behind me- Justin rises to his feet. So do Alyssa and Kim. They all grin as if they'd caught me red-handed in crime. Kim snaps her fingers, and, the the rest of the class is frozen. Even the water droplets freeze in mid-air. I stand , horrified and stare at them, but the trobule is just beginning.

The trio's faces begin to morph, ears growing long and pointed, their skin turning a nasty shade of green.
"W-what are are you?", I manage to ask.

"Kabaloi.", Justin laughs at me. "Also known as demons, or goblins I suppose. In the old times, we were fond of just playing tricks on mortals. But our patron entroduced to a new game: Demigod hunting. She will reward us for your capture."

My head is spinning. Demigods? Capture me? What?

Alyssa makes a fake pouty face to me. "Awww. Poor honey. they didn't even try to warn you of your destiny."

Kim snorts, her now scaley green face wrinkling into a smile. It doesn't quite go well with her fuschia dress and yellow painted nails(which are now about a foot long.)

I stumble back, away from them, towards the teacher's desk. With a shaking hand, I nearly reach the phone-

"Oh, No you don't!" Alyssa lunges at me so I swat her away with the nearest thing on hand- my teacher's bag of Cheez-it's.

She screams as the bag rips open on her face. "SALT!"
Wherever one of those orange squares hit her, skin begins to bubble. She wails in pain and sinks to her knees.

I stand back repulsed and watch as she shrivels up. Gross.
It reminds me of the time on the playground the mean kids poured salt on a snail.

I have to get out of here. While Kim and Justin are distracted, I run for the door.
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
You like it? I thought it was okay while I was writing, but now I'm not sure...
over a year ago icuSTALKER said…
That was awesome!!!:D
Lol sooo glad I found this and yay! Her name's Jasmine!!:D that's my nickname XD
Well written!!! That was good!!! Post soon!!!:D
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
big smile
yay! Thank you! :D
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over a year ago BitemeIVampire said…
CHEEEZ ITS YUM! good story JV lala hurry up and introduce me!
over a year ago JasmineValdez said…
Sorry I haven't posted! School...ugh. I'll try to add another chapter soon, sorry again