chapter 1: mithril


speaker: sargeant Jackson please report to the captains office imedietly. i looked at the speaker." what did you do this time percy." asked the guy with blonde hair." i did nothing to her." i repleid." then you better go find out." he said, pushing me out the door of the guys locker room." kurz, i need my uniform." i said. he quikly threw me my uniform and closed the door. i quikly put it on and walked towards the captains office. i kept walking until i saw the captains office. i knocked on the door." come in."
said a feminine voice. i opend the door and walked in. " mam." i said in a diciplined military voice." at ease sargeant." she said.
" sargeant jackson, you will be going on a important mission, you wil be going to school." " but m-mam you know that im only good with weapons and machines." i stamered. " then you better get studying your mission starts tommorow." she repleid. " you are dismisd sargeant." i turned and made my way towards the door. " oh and sargeant you cant go and reaveal to your target that your a mathril mercenary. go to the m9 hangers your taking that to your new home on long island across from the strawberry farm." she said i made my way back out of the office and went to the hanger.

what do you think.

that's cool! nice idea!

can anyone read my forum?
It's called The Daughter of Kronos

i hecked your story out on my dsi web so i couldnt comment i basicly read everything on it so thats why i barely comment on anybodys but i do read everyones
but its kind of disappointing to see all the unfinished stories and all of them are good too

chapter 2: woloves can fly?

we had just finished playing capture he flag but it was the suckiest one yet.
mostly because of that stupid house that was built across the street from camp half-blood. the strangest thing was that there was an airfeild at the back. luke told me that it was probobly a rich guy who had alot of money to have an airplane. the garage for the plane was strange though i know that a plane has to have a big garage to stay in but this thing was big enough to fit 5 columns of public planes and 5 stacked up on each other. " hey luke do you think we should investigate the place." i asked. " yeah that place is getting on my nerves, not being able to know whats in it for all i know their could be a whole bunch of monsters in their waiting for a chance to attack." he said." alright in one hour were taking half the camp over their to investigate." i said. " ill go make the plans."


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i got into my m9 wolfstorm the greatest of all m9s. but the only reason i got this machine was because i was a whispered i could easily kill someone by concentrating on their yes and saying a command, then they'll just do what i said.
speaker: erzu 7 are you ready for lounch. " urzu 7 here ready for lounch." i replied. speaker: lounch in 7,6,5,4,3,2,1 lounch.
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZRRRRRRRRRRRRRRTTTTTZTTTTTTSS­SSS­SSS­SSS­SS!­!!!­!!!­!!!
speaker: erzu 7 15 heat signitures have been spotted around your goal area, get rid of them but do not kill any of them.
" how am i supose t do that." isaid. speaker: i dont know think of something its your home. i sighed." roger." i repleid.
i flew towards long island and spotted 15 teen running arounnd with weapons. i quikly aimed around them and said. gunns activate and guns poped out of the wolfstorm then i finally said."FIRE.".....

what do you guys think i know its short but alot of school work. but ill try to get around. and i wil finish this no matter what.