The Heroes of Olympus The Right Hand Of Justice

v_lav posted on Oct 16, 2011 at 03:58AM
I've read many Percy and Chaos Stories so i want to try it out however i'm going to put a twist in mine
i forgot about the rules so now i'm adding it this is rated T
Disclaimer: sure i'm Rick Riordan jking anyways only using the charter's that RR has set out
Anyways i'll give a quick plot
so anyways here it is:
Percy after a quest saves two new demigods of the age of 17 the same as Percy one was a son of Poseidon Dylan Jones and Andrea Simpleton a daughter of Zeus.
Dylan being jealous of Percy's achievements and how the Camp looks up to him and Jason as them being leaders of camp he wishes to take Percy's position as leader(yes PJO and HoO is going to be in this). So Dylan with the help of Andrea steal Hades helm of darkness and Zeus's lightning bolt and hide them in the Poseidon Cabin by hiding under the floorboards before going on a quest with Andrea and Annabeth to retrieve the Golden Fleece. Anyways after they go on the quest Percy gets accused by Zeus, Hades, Hera, Ares, Athena, Dionysus and Hephaestus because Hera forced him too stand on his side and because the others hate his guts. So those Olympians propose Banishment. While the others Poseidon, Hermes, Apollo, Artemis, Aphrodite and Demeter because she's got nothing against Percy try to stop them.
So Olympus reaks havoc and Percy being the nice,friendly humble person he is accepts banishment so that war doesn't take place
I wanted to add more but it will ruin the plot and i'll also try to post often however don't blame me if i don't i'll probably be busy with homework and other stuff

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over a year ago v_lav said…
Chapter 1: 3rd Person POV
"Hey Chiron were back," Percy said with enthusiasm. Chiron noticed two teenagers a boy and girl who looked like Percy and Thalia. Percy then told Chiron what had happened and that the teenager with tousled black hair and light green eyes with sharp features that screamed out prince charming was his brother and that his name was Dylan Jones and that the beautiful girl with straight blonde hair and deep blues eyes that matched the sky perfectly she also had a stunning smile this girl was Andrea Simpleton a daughter of Zeus however even though she was beautiful as any Aphrodite girl her cold , icy stare told you to think twice before touching her.

Chiron nodded and told Percy and Annabeth to take them on a tour around the camp and to introduce them later at the camp fire so that they could get claimed, even though they already knew there Godly parent but it was just so that they would get a grand entrance in front of the camp.

Later on in the next few days Dylan and Andrea got use to the routine of the camp. In the morning they would get to sword fighting and was either taught by Jason or Percy and after that Chiron and Annabeth would teach monster fighting class. After that it was lunch then it would be Ancient Greek/Roman there they would be taught the ancient history of their civilization and would be taught the language of Greek or Latin. Then you would go off to the Pegasi stables to learn how to ride them and fine your own personal Pegasi. The next thing they did was Archery.

Half way through Archery Dylan learned he was quite decent at archery and that Chiron silently chuckled and said "You're much better at archery than your half brother". Dylan beamed at Chiron and Percy sheepishly said shut up. Andrea however was amazing with the bow she would tug the arrow into the string and gracefully shoot the arrow in the air and get a bulls-eye.

After they had came to the basement with Piper looking desperately for a weapon that would suit the two, however they ended up with nothing.

So Piper said Plan B.
They walked past the other cabins and the arena to the Hephaestus cabin to meet Leo the Cabin leader to create a weapon for the two.

Dylan became wide eyed at the cabin, there was wire, cables and bits and pieces of metal scattered across the room. You couldn't walk in any spot ]without touching a piece of metal in the room.
Dylan turned and looked at Andrea's blue eyes, bye her facial expression Dylan could tell as well that she was surprised as much as he was.

Piper pointed a finger to a room and the other too shuffled behind her. As you got deeper in the room the temperature changed it became more hot, the heat was almost unbearably. As they emerged they could see machines ovens tools workshops everywhere in the room, Piper pointed at a tanned boy with a goofy grin. Piper replied "that's Leo say hi to him". Dylan and Andrea walked carefully so they wouldn't break anything around them to the workshop that was a few meters in front of them.

Leo casually talked to Piper about new experiments and couples at camp. And when they finally saw the two coming Leo walked up and shook Dylan's hand. Piper talked in between saying things like "Dylan meet Leo, Leo meet Dylan". Just as Piper was going to say Leo meet Andrea Leo's eyes widened and stared at the girls for a good minute while muttering holy Hera over and over.

He then pulled his hand back and straightened his hair and confidently asked "can I have your number" awkwardly. Dylan and Andrea laughed breaking the ice while Piper groaned out loud and said in frustration "Leo how many times do i have to tell you not to hit on every girl you see". Leo laughed and said geez it was just a joke no need to get seriously about it. Piper stared and Leo finished talking and said so what do you guys want. Dylan and Andrea grinned after laughing and said make us a weapon.

Part 2 of Chapter 1
Chapter 1 Part 2:
Dylan Pov
I tilted my head to the side where the heat was the strongest and there was an elfish, small boy emerging."Hey Leo you done". Yeah check it out your weapon is this badge with a symbol of an Trident your fathers symbol and when you squeeze on the side where the Trident is upright you'll get a celestial bronze sword and when you squeeze on the other side that has the Trident facing down you will get your sword and a shield made with a imperial gold trim and inside the trim is celestial bronze and drakon scales are glued onto the celestial bronze so that you can absorb an attack of an opponent.

I noticed that Leo blushed when he said Andrea's name and I then saw Piper mutter something about "Leo never changes".
Anyways Leo told us about Andrea's weapon. It was a celestial bronze hunting knife. When you opened the blade and turn it down and press the hilt a Imperial Gold blade will appear and it makes it easier to control Andrea's Lighting abilities and when you open the knife and thrust it in the air a maple bow painted green will appear in her arms and a quiver in her back will also appear as well. He then told us that the quiver was enchanted. The quiver will only listen to the masters wishes so Andrea could choose any type of arrowhead. She could choose from celestial bronze, Stygian iron, Mortal Steele, Imperial Gold, and even arrow heads dipped in the River Styx. It was also enchanted to refill it's ammo when used.

After getting our weapons me and Andrea went for dinner. Percy my older bro by a month told me that i could wish for any type of drink and it would appear.
I thought i was kinda funny on how Percy would only drink blue cola and only blue food. During my time with Percy i learned about his adventures and i couldn't help but feel jealous like come on who wouldn't. After talking I asked if i could invite Andrea over since she was lonely and also because she didn't have much friends besides me, Percy, Annabeth, Piper but i'm not to sure if she would like to be around Leo though.

Percy and Andrea became more closer, he told me that Andrea looked a bit more like Thalia but have the complete opposite personality. When i thought of that i couldn't help but laugh. Percy had said that she was more of punk, being a rebel not listening to others.

Percy though said they have the same hair and eyes but it's just that Thalia had hers a bit more shorter where as Andrea had hers long and wavy.

He showed us a picture of him and Thalia and this kid called Nico a son of Hades. He had pale olive skin, jet black hair and dark black eyes that looked like he was looking into your soul but i guess he was, after all he was a son of Hades.

They were all smiling and being cheerful they all had three fingers up as a sign of the big three.
After debating on Thalia's and Andrea's looks I started to look up to Percy even though we were the same age. He had this feeling of protection like nothing was going to hurt us i guess that's why everyone in camp looked up to him as a leader. everyone looked up to him.

Near the end of the campfire we sung along with the Apollo cabin and went back to our cabins went to sleep.

The next day i lost my respect for Percy.
While sparring we started trash talking each other.
He started saying things like you can't get some, your mums a slut, your family left you alone to die probably because your not loved by your own parents and then i yelled back in rage "Oh yeah all you can get is Annabeth!!! and you have had only one girlfriend so who are you to talk about anything." "And my mums dead you faggot".
He then dropped his sword and looked me in the eye with a sad expression and said "sorry about your mum i guess i'm lucky to have one". But then he did something even more unexpected "Hit me anywhere on my body with your sword i'll take the blame on what happened just do it". I ran in rage and stabbed him in the gut. Blood poured everywhere and campers ran all at me.
I then saw blood on my hands. On my face was an evil grin and I laughed hysterically.
I was then shell shocked i loved giving pain to other people, loved seeing the blood pour out but i couldn't understand why i liked it.

So what do you think
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over a year ago v_lav said…
Chapter 2
Andrea Pov:
I watched in shock as Percy and Dylan fight.Percy was yelling trash talk at Dylan while he gave some interesting comebacks.

You could feel the deadly tension in the arena it was like two cowboys staring at each other for a minute before a shootout.

Percy had put venom in his words making Dylan even more angry and then when Percy had mentioned his mom I fought down some tears. His mom had taught us on how to survive in everything when we were on the road

Flashback
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Half way through spring break.
I was hiding in the trees as figures with one eyes called out my name in my sisters voice. The creature perfectly mimicked her voice.

"Andrea, sweety come down, there's nothing to be afraid off".

I shuddered in fear. No matter how scared I was I steeled my resolve and promised myself to never comedown until help came.

I prayed to the Gods for help to come and i was beginning to think that i wasn't going to be able to get out of the tree, EVER.
But thankfully help came.

A boy with jet black hair and a middle aged woman with fair brown hair emerged behind the monsters and stabbed them in the back.
The monsters exploded into a yellow powder and was swept away into the breeze in a few seconds their remainders were gone.

The boy walked up to me and asked me my name.
I said Andrea in a scared small voice.

He told me about monsters the Greek Gods and so on. I learned that he was the same age as me 14 and that his name was Dylan and that his mum over there was Marsha a mortal with clear sight. His mum was always ready for a monster attack so she trained and learned how to kill monsters. Eventually teaching himself and me.

During the year when the battle of the labyrinth came we were hunted by Drakons.

She sacrificed her self so we could escape.
We ran to the cave with Dylan calling out his mums name. He wanted to help but i had to hold him back and in front of him we saw his mother die right in front of us.

Her back snapped and her body fell down and limped over her stomach with her bones sticking out of her pale skin, her body was snapped into half and her eyes were staring at us in a scared expression but she still smiled.

I thrashed my hands to the ground in rage and sadness and summoned lighting all around us destroying the drakons into nothing.

We ran to Marsha crying. Her last words were "Go theres a camp with demigods in the west you will learn more about your powers and you will get even better training". She turned to me and said with her last breath "Your father is Zeus and Dylan don't be sad your father Poseidon will protect you". Her eyes closed and we stayed their for a day and gave her a little funeral.

During the next year Dylan became depressed and sad but his only hope was the camp and he put everything into that. When killing monsters he started to change a hidden dark personality escaped, his only mission was to destroy.

So when we got halfway through to the camp we started arguing.

We didn't notice the Monsters coming behind us, but Percy protected us and got us here and in the first week of camp he started to look like his old self. End of Flashback
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Now hearing him laugh hysterically I have a bad feeling, i felt that he was back to his evil sick personality when he was depressed.

He would kill monsters and enjoy the thrill of destroying things. I prayed to the gods and hoped that Percy was going to be okay.

Annabeth Pov:
I ran to all the commotion and there I saw seaweed brain lying on the floor with blood all around him.

Before I broke into tears I ordered the best healers in the Apollo cabin to heal him and give him Ambrosia and Nectar.
I then turned around and snapped i yelled "WHO DID THIS".

I glared at the person who stepped forward.I realized it was Dylan.

I yelled even more louder making the other campers shiver in fear "HOW COULD YOU, YOUR OWN BROTHER, YOU STABBED YOUR OWN BROTHER".

I slapped him in the face so hard that even my hand throbbed in pain. But before I got to slap him again I heard someone groan and say in a quiet tone "Annabeth don't hurt him it was my fault i'll explain it to you when I finish recovering". With that Percy passed out.

I scowled and turned to Dylan "Your lucky Percy told me not to hurt you.
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Later on midnight

"Annabeth," muttered Percy.
I turned and walked back. "Yes seaweed brain" i said in a caring voice.
Is Dylan all right you didn't hurt him did you.
No I didn't Percy, tell me how did he stab you.
Percy plainly told me that he lowered his guard and that was how he got hurt but I could tell that there was something else in this but his glare told me not to ask.

Then I heard a knock on the door. I reluctantly grabbed it guessing that it was Chiron and Mr D. But to my Dismay i saw Andrea.

She asked can I please talk to Percy alone.
I accepted and took my chance to eavesdrop. I wanted to know what truly happened and me being Athena's daughter not knowing this pained me eventually curiosity had taken me.

I inched closer to the wall.
"Percy," Andrea said.
"Wait I need to close the door properly". She turned and glared she knew what I was doing.

Even though she knew I still went over and listened into the conversation.

I picked up a few things like evil personality, Drakons, Marsha, Zeus and Poseidon.

I opened the door and Andrea left with a scared face. I turned and looked at Percy he too was scared.
I closed the door and crept behind Andrea i wanted to know more and I couldn't leave this opportunity.

I followed and listened to her mutterings and what I heard was so devastatingly shocking that it sent shivers down my spine

Damn that was long it took me an hour to write that an i will probs add that later anyways give me advice and all but there will be props to the person who guessed what Annabeth heard
over a year ago v_lav said…
Oh my god i'm so pissed when i finished this chapter before my computer stopped responding and it didn't post so i am rewritting this chapter aghh!!! ><

Chapter 3
Percy Pov:

"Ah Percy can I please talk to you". Alone.
Annabeth nodded and walked to the door with her hair whipping around her back.

"So ahh what do you want to talk about Andrea". Before answering she turned and glared intensively she then said "Wait I need to close the door properly".

I guessed that Annabeth was listening I could tell. I saw her stormy gray eyes dart around the room when she peeped on the side of the white wooden door.

Andrea walked over to the door and hissed "I know your there Annabeth". Her tone of voice even scared me this must be serious I thought.

She turned and looked me in the eye, her electric blue eyes flooded with tears of sadness but also pained for another reason she was probably worried as well.

She walked forward and grabbed one of the closest wooden chairs and sat with her arms hunched over her back her hand clawed the armrest and then relaxed she sighed.

"Percy I need to tell you the full story before we came here". I nodded with a blank face and listened.

For a few good minutes she talked about their first meeting, how the cyclopes stayed near her while she was hiding in the trees, her training with Marsha and the death of her. their Godly parents guiding them and then Dylan's sick twisted other personality. But the last thing that she told me shocked me beyond other things I've seen in my small demigod life as a pawn for the Gods.

"Percy Kronos is back when Gaea opened the doors of death she revived Kronos so that he could be plan F if they failed {haha get the pun F for fail woops i guess it wasn't really funny :( } and that his mission was to get the Giants Gaea and the other Titans out of their slumber and return to destroy the Gods and demigods.

When we traveled around trying to find the camp Kronos forced half of his essence to try and control him. But Dylan fought back now his body is in a battle against Kronos and his evil personality.

However when Dylan is in massive pain and grief Kronos would feed off those emotions and grow stronger and at weak times like this he would gain power over his body.

"Trust me i know". She paused and clutched onto her heart. I was about to help but she continued on.
"Kronos he- tri-ed to kill me once but Dylan screamed not to with tears flooding from his face".
"When his weapon came close to my heart Dylan stopped and regained control".

She started crying and ran out of the room i called her name but she ran quicker than i could blink an eye. I sat up on the bed shocked and scared. 1 for my half brother. 2 for the new thhreat that was coming.

Annabeth ran into the room and saw my face. She turned back making squeaking sounds on the floorboards and slamed the door in pursuit of Andrea.

Andrea Pov:

I tried to hold my tears back but my emotions couldn't lie to my body. I mumbled while walking to my cabin "Damn Dylan getting possessed by Kronos".

I heard a twig snap i turned and moved close to the sound I heard a gasp and then all of a sudden a blonde haired girl flew pass me. I realized it was Annabeth

"Hades no I just told her about Kronos". I ran trying to find her but I soon gave up their were more important things that I should worry about.

I walked pass the other cabins the Big house the ocean and the Oracles Cave all the way to the Poseidon Cabin.
I opened the blue door. The smell of seawater was in the breeze. I saw a water fountain filled with golden drachmas on the bottom of the bowl. I looked at Percy's bunk his clothes were chucked on top of the bed. The bed sheets were messy and the cover for the pillows were crinkled. I tilted my head to the side i saw pictures Items his beaded necklace that had four beads on it. The last one had a engraved picture of the empire state building with small names engraved around the Building.

I then called for Dylan.

He materialized behind me and with his left hand he grabbed my two hands and swung them around my back as if I was handcuffed by two policemen. With the other hand he covered my mouth so that i couldn't scream.

He whispered in a different voice "Guess again".
He let go off my mouth but still held on too my two hands.
I silently muttered "Kronos".



Major cliffhanger now boys and girls this is when the story actually begins.
Now do the usually comment give advice and guess what will happen next
over a year ago Kaity_daAwesome said…
I JUST READ IT!!! it awesome please keep posting!
over a year ago v_lav said…
hey i put this on the son of neptune but i left it and put it onto the Mark of Athena forum heres the link link