Pokémon idea for pokemon comic: the real reason Mewtwo hates Mew

flippy_fan210 posted on Feb 17, 2013 at 07:58PM
Mew:*floating twoards Mewtwo* guess what bro?

Mewtwo:*looks up* what do you want?

Mew:*pulls out a jar of dirt and starts singing the jar of dirt song*

(after 10 whole hours of Mew singing)

Mewtwo:What.............the........fu-

(their house explodes from Mewtwo's rage)

Mew:*pops up from the rubble still holding the jar o dirt* what's your problem? i was just telling you about my jar of dirt.

Mewtwo:*eye twitch*........that's it, I'm taking over the universe. Away! *flies away*

tell me what you think.
last edited on Feb 17, 2013 at 08:00PM

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over a year ago flippy_fan210 said…
the comic series is called the legionaries. it's about the crazy lives of the legendary pokemon. me and my friend just randomly came up with this.
over a year ago zeebem10 said…
Depends on what genre it's supposed to be. Comedy? Drama? I thought Mew wouldn't sing "The Jar of Dirt" song. Why does he have the jar of dirt? Why did Mewtwo overreact about the song? DETAILS! We need details and a plot. Even if it is random and supposed to be a comedy, it needs a plot. It had no plot. I would work on it. Not trying to discourage. It needs a base. That's all. I give it a 3/10
zeebem10 commented…
Okay. It had a plot. over a year ago