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So I wrote this song yesterday & I would really like to know what you guys think of it. Thanks. :)

- I still remember you.
I was that new girl, you were that hot guy. Soon we would turn into a big mess. I looked at you, you looked at me, both waiting to say something. Who would've known that I would've fell so damn hard? But that's not where our story ends.
"Remember the day we met? You turned me into a hot mess, now there's nothing I can do. You have that new girl, I'm still stuck on everything we've been thru. Baby I still remember you."
The days went by, I fell more in love, just by looking into your green eyes. Remember that night at your house? Shit who could forget. You had me head over heels, it was just so unreal, I was finally yours.
"Remember that day we met? You turned me into a hot mess, now there's nothing I can do. You have your new girl, I'm still stuck on everything we've been thru. Baby I still remember you."
Now everything that happened with us has turned into memories. It's that typical high school story. I was just that new girl, that fell for that jock. & that's how our story ends. But heyyy
"Remember that day we met? You turned me into a hot mess, now there's nothing I can do. You have that new girl, I'm still stuck on everything we've been thru. Baby I still remember youuuuu."
 JayyyKayy_ posted over a year ago
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LaDispute said:
Not bad but sort of cliche and unimaginatively worded..

Sorry :c
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posted over a year ago 
animelol said:
Wow! Thats pretty good! I don't really know though without the tune, but I love the lyrics!
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teentop449 said:
It sounds like a poem!

I <3 INFINITE!!
Sorry! random!!!
But yeah it sounds like a poem!!!!
i like it!!

Infinite is south korean!!<333
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It sounds like a poem!

I <3 INFINITE!!
Sorry! random!!!
But yeah it sounds like a poem!!!!
i like it!!

Infinite is south korean!!<333
posted over a year ago 
misscrazel said:
It's really good!
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posted over a year ago 
ktichenor said:
I like it! I think it could be a poem or a song. Very cool! :)) I hope you write more
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