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What do you think of this idea?And would you read it?(do not copy!!!!!)

Kim is your average 13 year up until her 14 birthday when she discovers she has extraordinary powers.She wakes up in the middle of the night to find that her eyes have gone a light sparkly pink colour.Her parents tell her they have powers too.Kim then takes special classes to train her powers were she meets this gut called Kristian.Kristians power is to make people fall in love with him.Little does Kim knoe her real parents are 'evil' and trying to rid the world of powerless people!Kim falls for Kristian.Kristian asks Kim back to his house where he drugs her.Kim wakes up in her real parents house strapped to a chair!Her own parents are going to kill her for their own daughters powers!!!!!!!
What do you think of this idea?And would you read it?(do not copy!!!!!)
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I would so read that story sounds good
princesspinkla posted over a year ago
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You had me at the sixth line.
dragonrider posted over a year ago
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you lost me at the part about love
gaaria posted over a year ago
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greekgirlA said:
please write it and publish
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posted over a year ago 
cheeeese said:
thats a good story :) whats kim's powers?
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posted over a year ago 
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Kims powers are: Controls weather with her moods,plant growth she can kill you if she touchs you she can control liquids and thats only a few!!!!!I havent thought of anymore!
Cullen-fan posted over a year ago
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what about... can manifest the 4 elements??
1-2vampire posted over a year ago
Elie_star said:
Mmm, I don't know. I'd like to read it... Maybe Kristian will fall in love with her?
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posted over a year ago 
Dearheart said:
(Sparkly, light-pink eyes?? *facepalm* OMG...)

Sounds to me like you have a class 1 Mary Sue in the making. I strongly suggest you run your character(s) through this test before you go any further.

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It should help you get a better idea of where your character's at and which cliches to steer clear from.
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(Sparkly, light-pink eyes?? *facepalm* OMG...) Sounds to me like you have a class 1 Mary Sue in the making. I strongly suggest you run your character(s) through this test before you go any further. http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm It should help you get a better idea of where your character's at and which cliches to steer clear from.
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What exactly do you want me to do!!!?
Cullen-fan posted over a year ago
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I'm sorry for being rude...it's just that this sounds too much like something you'd find on FanFiction.Net. Like I said, just take a few minutes and go through the test. I really think it will help.
Dearheart posted over a year ago
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Chill out. No need to cuss. And dearheart was making A FREAKIN SUGGESTION
Fairstepshaven posted over a year ago
forbiddenLURVE said:
sounds really good!!! if you become an author and get it print i'll read it [:
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BiteMeCullen107 said:
nice but you should describe it more. i would so read it.
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Cullen-fan posted over a year ago
1-2vampire said:
REALLY GOOOD!! i wanna b an author and am riting a story too!!! im on chptr 11 so im not done yet, my link for the first 2 chapters is,

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PLEASE LOOK AND COMMENT!!!
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Cullen-fan posted over a year ago
booklover101 said:
that is awsome r u going 2 finish it i would tottaly read it!!!
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anakin_fan81 said:
This sound kind of wierd. Maybe you should work on the idea a bit and make it less confusing.
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posted over a year ago 
Shepard14 said:
I like the Idea...Although DearHeart? Why is it you sem so critical of other ppl's writing? I don't mean to sound antagonistic when i say that....I am just curious....You know...a thought just occured to me....what if celebrities have profiles on here...hahahah that would be funny
to see their reaction when they see how many fans they have on this website alone..hahahaha
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posted over a year ago 
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lol that was so random with the celebrity thing. but that would still be awesome!
BellaCullen96 posted over a year ago
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I KNOW RIGHT! COMPLETLY RANDOM...but i just thought of it and i HAD to share it
Shepard14 posted over a year ago
renesmee13 said:
write more will ya?
it was pretty good =)
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posted over a year ago 
samoangirl96 said:
i like the story except the kristian part sorta freaky but other then tat pretty cool story can't wait to read more of it
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THE KRISTAN PART IS THE BEST PART!
bananafreak18 posted over a year ago
sickla said:
wow
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posted over a year ago 
writer67 said:
laws of stone of magic rules, do not allow others fall in love it must be free will, for safety reasons!
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sixtynugget said:
How about while she is attending this magical school she befriends a geeky nerd who can mindread and use telekinieses
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posted over a year ago 
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that sounds cool
annalia posted over a year ago
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GOOD IDEA
bananafreak18 posted over a year ago
bananafreak18 said:
WHEN U FINISH IT GIVE ME A HEADS UP CUZ THAT IS A AWESOME STORY!
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posted over a year ago 
tall said:
nic story
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prim17luvr101 said:
My personal opinion is it's kind of boring and not well developed at all.
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Shirohige1939 said:
The story sounds great. I would read it. Sounds very interesting
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Sutelc22 said:
geat writing my friend.
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