Should I continue to write my story?

Even if only a few people are reading, that doesn't mean you should quit. If you want to continue it, then go ahead and continue it. The amount of comments shouldn't make you stop writing it if you like it.

I did not read to much of it (sorry) for two resons 1. I have a TON of home work and 2. I found the back and forth transition from duncan to courtney confusing. but I myself have continued writing a story even though no one read it. I don't care! If I want to write a story and I'll write a story! don't let anyone or anything holed you back! ya know what? I think this week end I'll try your story again how does that sound? Then at least I will be reading it. :)

Please keep writing! I love it and I would love to read it!