Anime
Anime Manga: Elfi: a war-time love story
Joymofo posted on Jan 11, 2013 at 03:28AM
Title:Elfi
page 1_________________________________________ Panel 1 Open in the village of pangate, a run down place where slaves ore the main export Panel 2 over head of a children running in the street panel 3 a boy(sage) leading a girl(Elfi) and running from a butcher(off panel) Buthcer:"Hey get back here with that!" Sage:"come on...this way" panel 4 boy(Sage) leading the girl(Elfi) down an ally way sage:"we gotta go.. this way, come on." panel 5 boy and girl standing at a wall sage:"oh no... a dead end" Panel 6 boy and girl looking and man off panel shadowing over them Man:"you kids just make a huge mistake" panel 7 boy(sage) looking over at girl(elfi) who is now crying Sage:"dont worry Elfi i wont let anything happen to you" Panel 8 sage arms stretched out as to protect Elfi "i wont let you hurt her" Panel 9 letterbox of devilish smile panel 10 man pushes boy(sage) to the away(towards reader) panel 11 man with one hand on girl(Elfi) man:"well kid, hows 'bout you give my the girl and we call it even" Panel 12 Boy sage running at the man Sage:"get your hands off her!" Page 2_________________________________________ panel 1 later...boy(sage) and girl(Elfi) sitting on hill outside of village Panel 2 Boy(sage) badly beaten sage:"...sigh" panel 3 Boy(sage) hanging his head down, girl(Elfi) eating a peice of bread Elfi:"thanks..." Panel 4 Boy(sage) looking up with a smile sage:"sigh.." panel 5 Boy(sage) now standing up Sage:"come on, we be need to leave before night falls" panel 6 Girl(elfi) now standing beside Boy(sage) Elfi:"yhea i guess your right" panel 7 boy start to walk away girl standing stil both silhouetted Sage:"one day im going to leave this all behind" Panel 8 girl(elfi) chasing after boy(sage) Elfi:"sage...wait" panel 9 girl(elfi) grabbing boy's(sage's) hand Elfi:"promise.. promise you wont leave me..." panel 10 boy(sage) blushing Sage:"i promise page 3_________________________________________ panel 1: boy(sage) and girl(Elfi) holding hands on hill over looking (pangate)village Elfi:"and promise we will stay together, forever and ever?" Sage:"i promise" Panel 2 close up on girls(elfi's) face Elfi:"cross your heart and hope to die?" panel 3 Sages face looking mischevious Sage:"well....." Panel 4 girl(elfi) angry/sad face Elfi:"SAGE!?!" Panel 5 boy(sage) kissing girl(elfi) on the nose Sage:"of course..." Panel 6 boy(sage) now away from girl(Elfi's cheek) Sage:"forever and ever.." Panel 7 6 years later...Sage is now 16 and Elfi is now 14, sage, is packing his things, crying and bleeding, Elfi in the background Elfi:"sage?, Sage are you okay? what are you doing? Sage:"im leaving" panel 8 Sage now facing Elfi blood and tears rolling down his face Elfi" leaving? why? and why are you bleeding?" Sage:"i cannot stay here any longer, they treat us like slaves they beat us, and i.i..." Panel 9 sage, now hanging his head down with tears in his eyes Sage:"i dont want to see you hurting anymore.." Elfi:"sage..." Panel 10 sage looking at Elfi Sagin in the forground and Elfi being in the background sage:"come with me" Elfi:"n..no" Panel 11 close up on Elfi (now crying) face Elfi:"my place is here, with you" Panel 12 Sage finishing packing Sage:"no it's not, not anymore." Elfi:"but...sage..." page 4_________________________________________ panel 1 Sage silhouetted as he leaves the room in back ground, Elfi in the forground Elfi:"i...i.." Sage:"Goodbye elfi" Panel 2 Sage leaving village(in background) Sage:"cross my heart..." Panel 3 years later...Sage is now 18 and a soilder for the army standing outside his village (pangate) now in ruins Sage:"Elfi, im home..." panel 4 planes fly overhead of the village that's the end of part one hope you guys enjoyed anyone who want to help out just post -thanks! Joymofo |