The first chapter of my new Alpha and Omega story, where Kate is hypnotized by an old friend of hers from Alpha School and Humphrey must try and fight for her
I tried hard on this, so I'd like some feedback please. (there's no kate, cuz im a girl, so..) I'll make more parts, popular or not. again, FEEDBACK PLEASE!! (edit made to the story) From now on, it'll be less like the movie.
Okay so there's replaced people with new appearance to make it less like the story: Lilly- Liz, Hutch- Jason. Removed: Kate, Cando, Garth. Added: Calla, Eric. Nothing drawn by me. Feedback highly appreciated!