I tried hard on this, so I'd like some feedback please. (there's no kate, cuz im a girl, so..) I'll make more parts, popular or not. again, FEEDBACK PLEASE!! (edit made to the story) From now on, it'll be less like the movie.
Okay so there's replaced people with new appearance to make it less like the story: Lilly- Liz, Hutch- Jason. Removed: Kate, Cando, Garth. Added: Calla, Eric. Nothing drawn by me. Feedback highly appreciated!